The Golden Year
cock crow
their kiss
the salute
to dissolve days
– pause time
her worn
blush rune
extraneous
neigh – redundant
always
his naked
lips thrilled
full seasons long
compensating
youth spent
unto
this gilt
jubilee
generation
in – sync
Dear reader I want your honest opinion, is this poetry, or is it mere doggerel?
Please give me feedback and save me from further embarrassment. I plan to read this work at a party celebrating our 60 year marriage.
Is that wise?
Inshore Cassandra 